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A New Galaxy Uncovered

A New Galaxy Uncovered

Drawing Drawing \ Nature | 08/16/05 @616 | Taz | Comments critiques (16) | Views views (857)


A New Galaxy Uncovered
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Now, on this i actually worked fairly hard on... and i tryed for ages to do something i really havnt done yet, but as you can see i didnt really succeed. So i hope you could give me some advice

thanks in advance
 
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Avatar Furitsu

 08/16/05 @641

Nice image, Tariq. The upper left big planet looks a bit flat. I like the gas-clouds. :)
 
Avatar Diane

 08/16/05 @747

Nice work, you are getting better and better! As Furitsu said, the left planet looks a little bit flat, you should contrast it more. Well done, nice composition!
+8
 
Avatar guymaz

 08/16/05 @808

not bad but dont use lense and the planet is really flat as diane said
try to get better textures for your planet i made my on my own
short i will post a colorising tutorial thats could help a bit
very good gas and star feildyou need to put some more improvments in your planet rings and some planet atmosfer should be good...
if you want some help contact me with a4748@hotmail.co.il (my MSN)
+7 good luck on your next work and may the force be with me.
 
Avatar guymaz

 08/16/05 @808

not bad but dont use lense and the planet is really flat as diane said
try to get better textures for your planet i made my on my own
short i will post a colorising tutorial thats could help a bit
very good gas and star feildyou need to put some more improvments in your planet rings and some planet atmosfer should be good...
if you want some help contact me with a4748@hotmail.co.il (my MSN)
+7 good luck on your next work and may the force be with me.
 
Avatar Taz

 08/17/05 @007

yeah... i know the planet is flat but thank you all for your comments:)
 
Avatar Andy--Jones

 08/17/05 @114

Very good. Love the gas in the bottom half. I would just make the light on the edges of the planets a little brighter and the top left corner darker. Great work. Love the stars.
 
Avatar BigD2000

 08/17/05 @131

yea i agree with Diane about what she said about the planet, your artwork is slowly improving and you should keep at it. i love the stars and the gas cloud affect, even though i know you wanted it to be like it opening into a new galaxy.
 
Avatar Taz

 08/17/05 @279

yeah... well, thank you all for ya comments and i do hope that i can produce something better next time round

once again thank you all
 
Avatar Halcyonic

 08/17/05 @280

Hey, good to see sumthing new from u...
As said above the big planet looks flat, I think adding a shadow would help make it look abit more spherical. The space dust is good, you have improved in that part, although in this case I dont think the gray parts work too well, maybe a more vibrant colour would suit it better.
Other than that, Keep it up!
 
Avatar Taz

 08/28/05 @618

Thanks for your comments:)
 
Avatar TOLEDO

 08/29/05 @747

good job Taz , i agree about the big planet
(thumbup)
 
frenchfry

 08/30/05 @256

i really like that ring around that blue planet and that light in the middle.
but like everyone else think that planet is a bit flat and fake looking but other then that

GOOD WORK
 
frenchfry

 08/30/05 @266

i really like that ring around that blue planet and that light in the middle.
but like everyone else think that planet is a bit flat and fake looking but other then that

GOOD WORK
 
frenchfry

 08/30/05 @267

i really like that ring around that blue planet and that light in the middle.
but like everyone else think that planet is a bit flat and fake looking but other then that

GOOD WORK
 
Avatar Taz

 08/30/05 @268

thanks... and frenchfry u only had to tell me once:)
 
Avatar bakatron

 12/30/05 @571

interesting but you shouls sort of concentrate on object depth to give it more of a 3d feel :)
 
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